Thursday 30 September 2010

Khaleefa Hamdan


I am so excited that Khaleefa Hamdan, a Fielding graduate, rapper and Slam Poet, will be visiting our school to speak to all Intermediate students on Friday, November 19th.

UPDATE: Even MORE special, he will be visiting R8A on Wednesday, October 13th during period 3.

Start thinking about questions you might want to ask Khaleefa about his proces or his poems. For a bonus, write some questions in the comment section here.

Two of his poems are posted below. They're really fun to read out loud, just wait until you hear him perform them!

Small and Sleek
Khaleefa Hamdan

So I decided to take a walk right, you know just minding my biz

And fiending a kiss from her thievenous lips, day dreaming of hips

And scheming of scripts of stealing a glimpse of seeing her strip

She’ll see me and trip, she’ll scream and she’ll diss and I’ll meet with her fist

When suddenly I heard a tiny voice say “Please, DON’T STEP ON ME!

Cuz you see your leathery weaponry will be the death of me!”

So I looked down and saw an ant so I asked “You say something?”

And he said “I didn’t say something you dumb thing, you think you run things?

I said one thing and that’s don’t step on me,
Christ, you must be blind AND deaf”

I said “Yo, you’ll die if I step” he said “Try I’ll bet I’ll make you cry and jet”

Now this ain’t what I was taught in science class and as the silence passed


I felt as brave as a lion’s ass but time was dyin fast

So I asked “How does it feel to live a meaningless existence?”

He said, “Trying to trick, diss prince?
Cuz in this instance there ain’t a big difference”


I told him “Well there ain’t no colony callin’ me constantly

Haulin’ meat or small and sleek y’all indeed crawl in speed all in streets

I’m in awe you geek, I’m tall and can speak and that’s the difference you bottom freak”

He said “Who you calling freak and stop stalling speech, you live for economies

Like our colony, you humans work and strive and keep hurt alive

And spend your whole lives doing back breaking labour, just so it’ll thrive"

I laughed in his face cuz, well, you know me the low key pro teen, I’m so mean!

He’s a joke like governments who go green “Homie we don’t follow no queen”

He told me “Pull out a twenty, right now! Come on, yeah the dollar bill! 

Watch me ruin your reality and all your skill will fall more, still 

Better haul your will cuz tell me what you see, Queen Elizabeth

See us ants we live and bet and give regrets still it’s a gift we met”


This ant spoke the truth, so like any dignified man with socks on

First I gawked on then realized I got brawn so I stomped him down, then walked on

Content with my ignorance as the clouds, sun, and plants followed me

We are the human race, the over glorified ant colony



Don’t Look
Khaleefa Hamdan

Don't look, don't look, don't look, don't look two percent of the world's population
Owns half the wealth & it's spent becoming nuclear rocket nations
God waited on us to work it out but got impatient, so he stopped his saving
It's like we locked with Satan, invading nations who fight back with rocks they slangin'
And fat cats think in power point & money so they invest in bullets & clips
And they pull it to clip the wings of the white dove, so dead bodies are fillin' the ditch
And mass graves like animals or better yet nuclear waste, no decency
Hell recently, we'll burn torches to look in Death's face to get a decent peek but
Don't look, don't look, don't look, they went to Afghanistan to pop some insurgents
Her pops was in service, got popped & it's hurtin', it's off to the surgeon
They're stopping their workin' to pop in his virgin, she's shocked & she's jerkin'
They swapin' & smerkin', she was a lone angel amongst the rotten & vermin
There was one of them, for every year that made up her age, ten war time crooks
And as they squeezed & forced themselves in she closed her eyes & thought "Don't look, don't look,
Don't look, don't look" is what he said to himself as he thought about what fame is
Payments made to the shameless tucked in the Caymans in laymen's that is famous
It left him dis-turbed how he's molding lives with words of kids who called him mis-ter
He'd write till his wrists hurt, looking at his inserts, it became sweet like a des-sert
So he grabbed his death maker, he used to keep the shells hidden in old books
He sat on his couch, closed his eyes put it in his mouth & thought "Don't look, don't look
Don't look, don't look" she was just your average daily teen using Maybelline
Trying to be a Cover Girl, she's made to dream of being a famous queen
So she's not happy with her body image, she no longer eats, starvin'
Like that's how every star been, star bent her stomach feels like two boxers sparrin'
In her mind, she's always ugly & she'll never realize just what her goal took
Anorexic, whenever she walks by the mirror she whispers "Don't look, don't look,
Don't look, don't look" he was a dull moth who spent late nights writing manuscripts
Thinking "Man, you sick!" tucked away in his room like a phantom's crypt
He was attracted to light made by this firefly, her face plagued his vision
See she's dating a pompous butterfly, so the moth would trace his incisions
Of every single heart break & past scar, he used to look up at the last star
He couldn't turn away like seeing the crashed cars; he was an ape with a glass heart
It baffled him how he came so far; he loved the bizarre words of James O'Barr
This love game is so hard, in order to cope, he made his lame old art in rain or stars
But the sound of their kiss is forever ingrained and burned in his memory
So he's up ripping all the pages out his notebook that were referencing
His truest love, it was never true, so now he sits lightless with his soul shook
Replaying the incident, remembering how the crow said "Don't look, don't look
Don't look, don't look" every night I speak to God through my pen's ink & notebook
Like Lord, this world is full of sin & murder but please, for our sake don't look
Don't look, don't look, don't look....

Alexandria


Today in the library, Ms. Holmes and I issued a challenge to you, the students of R8A. I have been using the school board's library check-out system to help you sign out books lately and I learned that the system is called "Alexandria". Your challenge today was to use the books in the library to determine why that system would be called "Alexandria". Several of you had good guesses, but ultimately, Mateen, Claire and Jumanh solved the mystery.

Alexandria is a city in Egypt where a very important building was located. No, it's not the lighthouse I'm referring to! Alexandria housed the world's first library.

Hopefully one of you will make a fortune one day with this knowledge nugget (perhaps as Jeopardy question!?).

Do you know any other interesting name origins? The library computer system is named after the location of the first library. Are you named for something special? You can leave a comment here or make a post on your blog for a bonus.

Assignment #2 - Empathy


This assignment is due Tuesday, October 12th (thank you, Melissa for the date correction!)

You are to write a post of at least 10 lines in length about empathy. Please use your own words and write creatively about the word "empathy". You may use your notes from your Free Write book to help you out. You can write a rap, a poem, a journal entry, a creative story or a reflection. Please be creative and use lots of detail in your writing.

For a bonus, try to identify the symbol above. Leave a comment below if you have a guess (or even better, proof!).

Day 2 - Today's Checklist

Good afternoon, R8A,

Today is our second day in the lab working on blogs. You have a lot of work to complete today. If you do not finish all the listed tasks in class time, you may stay after school or work on these tasks on the weekend.

The following tasks must be completed by Monday, October 4th:
-you must have your blog set up
-you must put a comment on my blog, telling me your blog is set up (then, I can link to your blog from mine)
-you must "follow" my blog publicly
-you must set your comment moderation so that you get an email when someone comments
-you must set your comment settings so that there is no word verification
-you must write your first juicy post (a Welcome post)

Friday 24 September 2010

Info: How to leave a comment

It is very important that you know how to leave comments on others' blogs. As part of Assignment #1, you have to comment on my blog and let me know you are done.

It is extremely easy to leave a comment. All you have to do is click on "comments" beneath any post and then enter your comment. Tah-dah.

Your comment won't automatically appear, as the blog moderator (writer) will need to approve it so that they can make sure comments are appropriate and they can respond if needed. Your comment will appear if they approve it next time they log in.

Assignment #1: Welcome Post

Your first assignment and your first posting will be a Welcome post. You will welcome new readers to your blog, introduce yourself and try to grasp the reader's attention, attracting them to come back to your blog often.

Once you are logged in, click on "New Post" in the upper right hand side of your page. You can then compose a message (don't bother with the Edit Html tab). The message composition works much the same way as a word processor like Microsoft Word does.

In your welcome message, I would like you to:
1. introduce yourself (first name ONLY)
2. tell your readers you're happy they're here
3. tell your reader a little bit about yourself. You will include 3-5 juicy sentences describing yourself with evidence (for example: "I am a little shy at school but I love watching "Glee" because I can imagine how amazing it would be to be able to be brave and sing in front of others.")
4. encourage your readers to leave comments or questions
5. thank your reader and encourage him or her to come back and visit often

Before you "Publish post", make sure to SPEAL CHEECK your work. (There's a little ABC checkmark icon in your menu bar, spellchecker will highlight the words it does not recognize).

Once you have written your welcome post. please leave a comment on this post on my blog. I will then link to your blog (you will see the links beginning to appear on the right hand side of my blog).

Setting up for comments


You need to help your blog become more user friendly.

Make sure that you have done the following:
-allow comments from anonymous posters (from your blog, click on "New Post" to get back to your editing screen, go to the Settings tab-->select Comments--> and change "Who can comment" to Anyone - allow anonymous posters")
-set up your preferences for comment moderation (Settings-->Comments--> and set your moderation preference as you wish, to either Always, Never or Only on posts older than 14 days)
-select "No" for "Show word verification for comments" (Settings-->Comments-->Show word verification...)
-follow this blog (Customize-->Dashboard-->Reading List: ADD-->type in my blog address http://www.pollockdigital.blogspot.com), you can also link to your classmates' blogs in the same way.

Word verification is annoying, time wasting and weird. Fortunately, someone has made some really funny word verification cartoons.

Welcome!

Hello students of R8A (and anyone else who happens to stumble on this blog!)

Welcome to your brand new blogging project for 2010-2011.

I am very excited about this project for a number of reasons:
1. I love providing you with the opportunity to use techlology in interesting ways in your learning.
2. We will be able to communicate with each other in new ways.
3. We will be able to communicate with other people (at other schools, in other cities) in interesting and exciting ways.

We will all be learning as we go, including me, your teacher. We'll try out some interesting things and I want you all to be open to new ideas as well as sharing your input on how things are going.

Our first steps:
-opening multiple windows in your browser
-creating your blog
-editing your blog template
-editing your profile (ensuring for privacy!)
-ensuring our settings are open so that people can leave comments (without having to fill in all those crazy "captchas")
-learning how to make a comment
-responding to comments
-labelling tags for posts
-creating hyperlinks
-embedding photos and video
-writing, spellchecking and editing posts
-making your first post


We will work together to develop your blogs over the remainder of the year. You will work on your blogs both in and out of class. Don't forget that you're welcome to make an appointment with me after school or during recesses so that I can give you some one-on-one guidance or you can have extra time to work in our computer lab.

To remind you what exactly a blog is, click on the highlighted word.

I am so excited about this project and I hope you are too!

Let's get rocking and rolling!

Miss P